Wednesday, 14 November 2012

Edited Essay Written by Me in ITC

Hey blog. It's twelve in the midnight. Well I am bored. I can't sleep. So, I decided to type out my essay here. It's my compo exam marked by my teacher. I will type the one that have corrected. Stay tuned!

Title:  Experience of meeting a celebrity
   
     I was alone and reading a Chinese novel at the bus station waiting for a ride to town in Hong Kong.  The bus station was crowded with people.  When the bus came, I boarded the bus without second thoughts.  The bus was crowded and I couldn't find a seat. The bus driver was rough and I couldn't steady myself standing.

      After a long drive, the bus suddenly came to a halt. I thought we had reached town, so I get out. I wasn't quite familiar with the place in Hong Kong.  I was shocked when I saw the sea and I thought :"Since when is there a sea in town? Have I come to the wrong place or is this the place where Hong Kong residents called town?" I asked one of the people for direction.  I wasn't in town but in Causeway Bay.  I did not know what to do since I had already alighted.

      Instead of waiting for another bus, I stayed there. I looked at the sky and it was blue. When I was enjoying the sky, when all of a sudden, I fell down. Both my legs were full of bruises and blood. It hurt. I cried. Suddenly, a guy appeared in front of me. He waved to me and took out a handkerchief to wipe off my tears. He helped me up.

       I saw his face. His face was chubby and he seemed so familiar but I couldn't put my finger on it. I asked his name, but sadly he didn't want to let me know. We went to the washroom and he washed both of my legs. He bought me a bottle of water too. At the moment, I was thinking: "Who's this guy?  Why is he so nice to me?"

       After that, he sent me back to the hotel. He told me that he was staying in the same hotel, so he would bring me out the next day. I was really surprised.

        The next day, he really asked me out. He bought me breakfast at the ground floor of the hotel. He brought me to Hong Kong Disneyland Theme Park.  He brought me to lots of places. We had a lot of fun. We took photos together. We bought a lot of souvenirs too. He asked for my name and of course, I did not let him know my real name.  I gave him my nickname, Faustina.  From then onwards, he called me Tina for short. When I was with him, I realised that he's a sweet guy.

       He's a friendly and caring guy. We talked a lot. He was special. He was ambidextrous!  He could write with both of his hands.  His handwriting was neat and pretty.  I also realised that his voice was much softer than others. I asked whether he was a Singer or not. Still, he remained mysterious.  I observed his face carefully.  He resembled somebody famous.

      "Peng!!!....." came a crash. He rushed to the direction of the sound without second thoughts. There had been a car accident and a little kid was hurt. The driver and the child were covered in blood. That guy called the hospital and stayed there for help. I went away because of fear. I did not tell him. I went away quietly.  I went back to the hotel and get ready to go back to Kuching.  I felt disappointed when I met a guy without getting to know his name.

        When I was in Kuching, I uploaded a photo of him and I on Facebook.  My friends dropped their comments about the photo. I was shocked when they asked me why I was with Sungha Jung.  I was totally flabbergasted! So, I searched the photo of Sungha Jung on the internet.  "Oh my lord!  It's really Sungha Jung!!" I was perplexed.

        I had never met a celebrity in my life. I was lucky when I knew that I could meet a famous singer in Korea and I even took photographs with him. I wish to have second chance, and I hoped we would be together again. When there will be a second chance?

THAT'S ALL. I KNOW IT'S QUITE SIMPLE. BUT I HOPE YOU PEOPLE WILL SPEND A TIME TO READ IT. GOOD NIGHTT!!